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Re: Dying Hope
Hello! This piece has potential. I think it's really good that you wrote it in present tense because it makes the reader feel more like they're really there. In the ...
Apr 12, 2010 -
Re: Twisted like a twizzeler
Hi there! I like this, but I think it suffers from a lack of punctuation. Commas help readers read your work and allow them to take pauses, and I think ...
Apr 12, 2010 -
Re: MysticalBlood's drawings and photo's
Hi! This is quite nice, I like her face. However, her nose seems a little odd - more like two points than two nostrils from what I can see. Also, ...
Apr 12, 2010 -
Re: Mole live in cabins not Holes
Hi! This is very interesting. I like how you detail all the things that the picture reminds you of. I'd like to see more of an explanation of why you ...
Apr 12, 2010 -
Re: Chat Quiz!
Thanks for coming everyone! The winners were: Adnamarine (4 points) JabberHut (3 points) Jagged and silented1 (2 points each)
Apr 11, 2010 -
Re: Chat Quiz!
I'm bored so I thought I'd host a quiz in the chat, like, now. Well, soon - at the next half past! So 8:30pm British Summer time. Or, from the ...
Apr 11, 2010 -
Re: What Did You Eat Last?
I had a tuna sandwich too! And roast chicken crisps. Nom nom nom.
Apr 9, 2010 -
Re: Two possible minor changes to the header?
I think it looks better underneath the header, to be honest. :P It sort of acts like a nice border.
Apr 8, 2010 -
Re: Lulu.com
I publish my literary magazine with lulu.com. I like it because it means I don't have to deal with printing and distributing, and as I'm not really in it to ...
Apr 7, 2010 -
Re: Nature
Hello! I don't know much about photography but I think these are pretty cool. One thing that struck me is the kind of desolate look of the last one, and ...
Apr 3, 2010 -
Re: YWS helped me get published
Awesome! :D
Apr 3, 2010 -
Re: Submission Call For YWS News!
Someone should totally do regular YWS member interviews.
Mar 30, 2010 -
Re: YWS's own... THREAD BOX POEM!
In life, there is worry. In the day, there is fear. In light, there is confusion. In sleep, there is nothing. In darkness, there is comfort. In emptiness, there is ...
Mar 30, 2010 -
Re: Submission Call For YWS News!
Haha Ben, I knew you would be all over this!
Mar 28, 2010 -
Re: Submission Call For YWS News!
How much of an 'opinion' can we rant on? Can we use pictures? I want to write an opinion column on ridiculous fashions, and use pictures from Vogue Magazine. Can ...
Mar 28, 2010
